Maldoror ([info]maldoror_gw) wrote,
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GW: Freeport 1 (rewrite)
AN: So this is what I've been working on these past months, in my scant spare time. I've always considered Freeport my best fic, if not the most approachable for casual readers. But I was still kinda learning back then, and the style was heavy at times (my exact thoughts, when I opened a chapter to check up a reference on anarchy I'd used, was 'The exclamation marks! They burns us!! They burns!'). I decided to fix it so I could reread it without wincing or rubbing my eyes. The storyline itself isn't changed, though some chapters and expositions have been tightened. Mainly it's for punctuation and readability. This is an LJ exclusive for the moment, as I want it all in one place for further corrections that readers might suggest. Later I'll disseminate it to the various archives (and won't that be a task...)

Now, on with the story. (For those not familiar with Gundam Wing, this probably won't interest you, though if you want to read some vintage Mal, you can probably read up on Wiki for the backplot and the rest should be self-explanatory)


Title: Freeport
Pairings: 2x5
Rated: NC17 - for language, violence, sexual content
Spoilers: Some, for series and episode zero.
Disclaimer: Gundam Wing belongs to its owners (Bandai, Sunset, and a whole host of others, none of which are me) and I'm not making any money off of them.


Warning: I'm sticking very close to the series' timeline in this fic. There won't be too many spoilers as the action happens at a later date. But for those who have not seen the series and are relying on fanon, note that this means that Duo and Wufei have NOT spent all that much time together during the war, and no, the boys never found themselves playing 'house' in one of Quatre's legendary mansions for months, or all hiding out in the same school or anything. EW didn't happen though (I sometimes wish EW had never happened in the real world, either... )


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" ...False security has lulled the madness of this world into a slumber. Wake up! An eye is upon you, staring straight down and keenly through, seeing all that you are and everything that you can never be. Yes, an eye is upon you, an eye ready to blink.

So face forward, with arms wide open and mind reeling. Your future has arrived... are you ready to go?"



--- Powerman 5000





Freeport by Maldoror
Chapter One


Chang Wufei was quite prepared to admit that he lacked diplomacy.

His friends would regretfully agree with him on this. They each had their own brand of the skill when faced with non-violent confrontation. Sally would cheerfully talk her opponents around, Trowa would reason them into a corner, Quatre would listen and discuss fairly, Heero would-...no, Heero was as devoid of diplomacy as Wufei, but people tended not to argue with him so it didn't stand out as much.

Wufei wondered how his colleagues would handle this upcoming reunion.

He hadn't seen Duo since they were both fifteen-year old terrorists. These would be the first words Wufei had spoken to his one-time ally since they'd said a casual 'Good luck' on MO2 five years ago and gone their separate ways, Wufei turning eventually to the Preventers and Duo disappearing into the worst den of sin in the solar system.

In those circumstances, 'Hi Duo' seemed...insufficient.

The other alternative was, 'Maxwell, I'm here on a mission. You will help me or I'll make sure Trowa stops ignoring the petty smuggling operation you run on the side.'

His memories of Duo were distant now. A fiend in a cockpit who enjoyed fighting way too much, an L2 spacer street rat turned war hero under the odd set of circumstances only a civil war could conjure. Wufei had not been particularly surprised to hear that Maxwell had not settled down much in this new peace they enjoyed. No, not surprised at all. But Wufei did remember Duo Maxwell well enough to know that option number two - 'help me or else' - would result in absolutely zero cooperation and a punch in the jaw.

Better stick to 'Hi Duo', even if it sounded disingenuous.

“Don´t blame me if he kicks you out the door. He hates surprises,” Hilde muttered for the third time. Wufei pretended to ignore her once more, but inwardly he was beginning to wonder if Duo would even let him get the 'Hi' out.

The television was on in the background. There was a lit screen everywhere he went these days, people watching it like cows chewing cud. Even the Schreibeker woman was looking at it frequently, as if she needed its bright presence to counter the Preventer's sombre aura. Some slice-of-life garbage was on; a competition between three villages to make the best float for the New Year's peace march. Hilde watched these people she would never meet build a useless contraption she would never see and that would not improve her life in any capacity as if she were witnessing the birth of a niece or nephew.

Wufei glanced at his watch. Two hours and counting spent waiting in this room. He wished they had another RV point for Duo than Schreibeker's house.

The documentary ended. Wufei didn't catch which village won the competition and only knew it was finished when Hilde switched to the news broadcast. The headline was President Relena Peacecraft - no great surprise there - opening the latest Peace Park. Somewhere in Europe, Wufei noted, not, say, in the racketeer's paradise of Taiwan, the bombed out warzone around Seattle or on L2.

The ESUN Economic section of the journal elaborated on the employment rate, holding strong and showing another 0.5% increase this month. Wufei stared stonily at the anchorwoman's earrings, swinging like a hypnotist's pendulum. He knew those figures did not include the statistics for regions below the Economic Disaster Line, colonies in transition governments and ex-soldiers still being 'retrained' under the Rehabilitation Act.

The L2 riots were briefly mentioned after ten minutes of news, right after the report about Prince Milliardo's latest Mars project and six pieces of advertisement. The Perfect Woman featured in one of the ads had honey-blond hair and big vacuous eyes; an echo, if not a downright copy, of Relena but without any of her surprisingly strong will and determination. As if the TV execs wanted to water down her image, make her harmless and easily consumable along with the latest brand of cereal or dish soap. But maybe that was his cynicism talking. Watching too much television tended to leave Wufei 'a bit keyed up', according to Trowa's dry observation.

"I'll just go see what my guys are doing out there with that scrap," Hilde said in a tight voice and nearly ran out the door. Wufei realized he'd been scowling at the screen. The same advertisement ran again, right on cue. The woman didn't look that much like Relena on second viewing, but it was still annoying.

He took advantage of Schreibeker's absence to switch the TV off, his sanity being more important in his eyes than a minor breach of propriety. He took up her post at the window, standing out of habit in the angle where he couldn't be seen and shot at from outside. Hilde lived on the edge of her scrap yard; a business she'd started up during the war as a front for Duo's terrorist activities, but apparently the woman had taken to trash and kept it thriving during peacetime. It took all sorts.

Talking of which...

Wufei's one-time ally wasn't being particularly careful, beyond the fact he'd snuck in through the back door where he couldn't be seen from the yard. Wufei heard a faint 'Yo, Hil? You there?' and footsteps heading his way. He had three seconds to turn around and face the door before it opened. Not enough time to decide just how he was going to re-introduce himself.

"Heero, bud, you-... you've got to be fucking kidding me."

"Maxwell."

Well, that worked too. No friendly greeting would have made this any easier.

Duo Maxwell. Same heart-shaped face, same braid. Dressed in the khaki and tan work clothes of a scrap-dealing Sweeper. Wufei felt a touch of surprise at the absence of signature black, apart from a pair of tight leather gloves. No visible weapons, but he carried himself like he was armed. He hadn't changed all that much.

As Duo took a few steps into the room, Wufei realized, belatedly, that Duo was no taller than he was, maybe even a hair shorter. The way he held himself, it was not immediately apparent. Eyes of that unusual shade of blue that Wufei remembered were fixed on him. Duo wasn't smiling.

"Wufei Chang, and all by your lonesome. Tell me Heero's hiding behind the couch ready to jump out shouting 'Surprise!'"

"Do you think that's likely?"

"No, but that's the best outcome at this point."

Wufei had been expecting some hostility. Heero had warned him that Duo would probably be negative from the get-go. It was true, Duo did not like surprises, unless he was the perpetrator and the surprises were the kind that went boom.

"I know you were expecting Heero for this mission." Wufei made a stab at placating. It came out stiff. He didn't like the way Duo was treating him like the punch line of a joke that wasn't particularly funny. "But Yuy can't make it this time."

"He better be on his deathbed," Duo growled.

"Not quite."

The nature of the tension changed as Duo's eyes widened and his mouth turned down at the corners. With those two words Wufei was no longer an intruder and possible problem; he was one of five people - closer than friends through no particular desire of their own, but linked nonetheless - who was potentially here to give Duo a piece of very bad news.

"Just how bad?" Duo asked.

"He'll be okay," Wufei answered briskly. "He should be out of the hospital in a couple more days."

Duo relaxed a bit and rubbed his chin. "Damn, Chang, you scared me there. I thought the Suicide King had finally managed to get his ticket punched."

"It certainly looked like he was trying." Wufei’s own anger at his friend's recklessness was still simmering. They could have both been killed.

"What happened? Did he lose a barehanded fight with a Leo?"

"We were on L2 X953. Have you heard about the riots?"

The expressive eyebrows mocked him. "I live in Freeport, not under a rock."

"The fool jumped from a ten-foot wall right into a knot of rioters - in his Preventer uniform, of course - because he thought he saw some kid being crushed in the press."

"Yeah, sounds like something Heero would do... " Duo's gaze drifted, as if he was looking back at some memory replaying over Wufei's shoulder.

"Someone got him in the head with a brick. Concussion, hairline fracture, but no lasting damage."

"No, the head was never Heero's weak spot," Duo snickered.

"Then some rioter winged him with a baseball bat. Broke his upper arm."

"And where were you all this time?"

"Cold-cocking the bastard who was aiming at Yuy's back with a shotgun," Wufei bit out.

"Oh, so you jumped down from the wall too." Duo smirked. He didn't look surprised. "What about the kid?"

"Picked herself up, called Heero a 'fucking pig', tried to steal his gun and ran off when I glared at her."

Duo snickered. "Sounds like L2 hasn't changed that much. So he's got concussion."

"And a broken arm."

"Did he try to set the bone himself?"

"No, he waited for the paramedics this time."

"Oh? He's mellowed in his old age, hasn't he?"

"I insisted."

"Ahhh."

Some of the initial tension crept back, but the past and the friends that connected them had defused it. That connection would stop Duo from perfunctorily kicking Wufei out the door. It wouldn't stop him from staying 'no' to the mission, though.

"Here." Wufei went back to the couch where he'd left his folder and slipped out the photograph and ID. "Know this man?"

Duo approached on a tangent, holding out his hand. He glanced at the pic for one second and tipped it back to Wufei, holding it carelessly between two fingers. "Nope, never seen him."

Wufei wouldn't have expected him to say 'yes' if the man was his worst enemy, not without some good reason first. "We've code-named him Carver. I want you to take me to Freeport and help me find him."

"Yeah, I was afraid you were gonna say that," Duo said drolly, lacing his hands behind his head in a sort of relaxed shrug of dismissal.

Wufei managed to ignore the tone, but his limited store of patience was already wearing thin. "Let me give you his outline and why we need him.”

"Sure, why not." The shrug was still in place as Maxwell wandered towards the window. "Make it good."

"He's a hitman."

Duo snorted. "Make it better."

"Nine victims known to date. Three of those were children," Wufei said, playing what he hoped was his trump card.

Nothing in Duo's stance changed, except that his gaze twitched from Wufei to the window, but Wufei felt that he'd managed to engage a bit more of Duo's attention.

"I find it hard to believe a hitman would take out kids. Unless they were witnesses?" Duo asked. His head was slightly cocked, waiting for the answer.

"We don't know for sure, but two of the victims were killed in their family home along with their parents, even though the children were hiding in their room. Seven and five years of age. The third was twelve, butchered along with his mother while walking home from school."

Wufei slipped crime-scene photographs from the folder and held them out like a baited hook. It went against his instincts to share this much, but Heero had carefully coached him from his hospital bed on what to do and say before Wufei had left to catch his shuttle. Heero had been most insistent; it was crucial that Wufei involve Duo in the details of the crime as much as possible, particularly the bit about the kids. Duo would not take Wufei to Freeport just because they were one-time allies and somewhat connected, or because Wufei could throw Maxwell's ass in jail for a couple of years if he didn't.

Duo's gaze flickered towards the photographs, but he didn't come any closer to examine them, sticking by the window with his hands sunk into the pockets of his Sweeper jacket.

"What makes you think he's in Freeport?"

"We have evidence," Wufei replied shortly. Then he frowned. He'd forgotten something..."Oh, Heero asked me to tell you that he uses some kind of cutting weapon, not a gun." For some reason his friend had been very insistent he mention that.

"A flick blade or something?" Duo sounded incurious. He'd taken up the same position at the window as Wufei had previously, to one side out of sight.

"No, a lot bigger. More like a machete. We don't call him Carver for nothing." Wufei glanced in distaste at the top crime scene photograph before putting them away.

"...Really?"

Wufei looked up. Duo hadn't moved, but his eyes were no longer focused on the scrap yard outside. After a few seconds of silence, he shrugged.

"Sounds like a real bastard. So what's your angle?"

"Angle?"

"Yeah. You and Heero only deal with the highly-flammable political stuff. I grant ya, I wouldn't want this guy dating my sister, but why are the Preventers so keen to nab him that Trowa'll risk sending one of his 'Specials' to Freeport? He's just a hitman."

Wufei kept his eyes on the folder in his hand. He hadn't thought Duo would pick up on that detail, or question him on it. "Most of Carver's known contractors to date have been radical organizations. He's been put in the Class A category because of the information he might have about their networks."

"Sounds a bit slim to me." Duo sounded puzzled and rightfully so. Carver had made it into Class A by only the barest of margins, and there were many other terrorists of greater importance out there.

But Wufei didn't care. This was the case Trowa had given him and the reasons involved were none of Duo's business. This was now Wufei's mission. And for Wufei, a total of nine murders was never going to be something he would think of as negligible.

"I've been asked to retrieve him. Trowa wants you to help me locate him in Freeport. Are you going to be difficult about this?"

He could hear the anger in his voice. That was stupid. It wasn't directed at Duo, and he shouldn't antagonize the man needlessly. He'd let Maxwell refuse to take him to Freeport. Then he'd get mad at him.

"Look, Chang, I'd love to oblige - after hauling my hump all the way out here and everything - but you'd not last three minutes in Freeport." Duo leaned against the wall next to the window and gave him a once-over that ended with a bemused shake of the head at the very thought.

"You've taken Heero there and helped him with his missions on four occasions. He's spent nearly two months there at one time. He managed."

"Yeah, but that was Heero. No offence."

Considerable offence taken. Heero was probably the best fighter the human race had produced to date, a one-man army, a soldier to the tip of his deadly fingers, but he was crap at undercover work and Wufei knew it.

"Well Heero can't make it," he ground out. "He's going to be stuck in a cast for at least a couple of weeks and on sick leave for as long as Barton can keep him tied to the bed. And then he has some other matters to deal with." More important cases, and the twice-yearly New Threat To Relena was already over-due; Heero would not want to bury himself in Freeport for a few weeks at this juncture in case he missed it. For some reason every revolutionary organisation seemed persuaded that bumping her off would usher in a new era of something or other. She acted a little like a lightning rod as a consequence. Wufei thought this was actually a fairly good use for her, but none of his colleagues seemed to share his opinion.

"You can't take Heero's place. It just won't work. You and Freeport?" Duo gave out a short bark of laughter, as if the very concept was a joke.

"Why not?"

"Why not?" Duo's reaction put that question on par with ‘why is space a vacuum’. "Because you'd have to blend into Freeport and follow the code, Chang. You'd have to shut up and behave and do everything I say at the drop of a hat if you even want to stand a ghost of a chance-"

"If that's what it takes.”

Duo stopped grinning and examined Wufei as if measuring the extent of the determination behind those curt words.

Wufei held the folder up. "I. Want. Carver. You know me, Maxwell. We fought side by side in pretty desperate circumstances. Did you ever know me to not do what it takes to bring about justice?"

Duo didn't answer right away. Maybe he'd remembered how Wufei had let himself get captured, chained and nearly executed just to get Nataku repaired, and the way he'd continued examining Altron's specs while their air was running out. Wufei had never let even impending death get in the way of his goals.

"I know you're committed, Chang, but that's not enough to wing it in Freeport. You're going to get yourself killed. More importantly,” Duo grumbled, “you're going to get me killed."

"Barton has authorized me to offer you ten percent more than your usual fee," Wufei said, trying to hide his distaste.

"He'd have to pay me a hell of a lot more than that to get me to commit suicide, yanno. I happen to believe that my life ain't cheap."

It seems it's still up for sale though, Wufei nearly said, but kept it to himself. Getting snippy wouldn't help, and anyway, who was he to talk. At least Maxwell was smart enough to put a consequential price on his life. Five years after the war Wufei was still throwing his away on a regular basis for free, or to be more precise for a yearly salary that made his banker cry into her mocha latte.

"Twenty percent," Duo stated, but he didn't seem to be fully into the negotiation. His eyes kept drifting towards the powder-pink folder Wufei was holding. Interesting, and more in keeping with the Duo Maxwell that Wufei remembered. Never one to resist a challenge, or the opportunity to do something dangerous and violent for some good cause or other.

Wufei held the folder up, waving it temptingly. "Ten percent and the knowledge that this guy will end up in jail and will never date your sister." Or kill any more children.

"Eighteen percent. I don't have a sister." But at this point Duo had already agreed. The money was just a way of letting Wufei know just how displeased the smuggler was about the circumstances.

"Twelve. ESUN has emergencies left, right and centre, we don't want to throw money away."

"Fifteen. Times are hard for everybody, Chang. I'll be doing all the work anyway..."

The last wasn't even a mutter, more a movement of the lips, but Wufei caught it nonetheless.

"Fifteen, and you'll get me aboard Freeport and assist me in apprehending Carver?" he asked suspiciously.

"Fifteen, and I'll make sure you guys arrest him next time he leaves the colony. Tro won't give me a single cred until then anyway," Duo pointed out.

'I'll make sure'? Wufei opened his mouth to protest, but remembered Trowa's hasty last words before he shoved Wufei onto the shuttle: "Be aware Duo might try to park you into a corner and go and find Carver himself. That's not an acceptable risk. Duo is an important resource; he's our entry into Freeport. Don't endanger him or allow him to endanger himself. But," here Trowa had smiled sardonically, "he's not going to like it, so make sure you get him at least halfway to Freeport before being your usual stubborn and confrontational self. Got it?"

"Fifteen percent," Wufei agreed, glowering at the folder.

"Done. I'll spend the bonus on a shrink; I need to get my head examined," Duo muttered, heading towards the hallway leading towards the back of the house. "Come on, let's get you dressed."

"Dressed?" Wufei fumbled the bag he was picking up. He was wearing his usual clothes when he wanted to go incognito into some slum or other.

"Yeah, we don't want you to stand out. Jeans will, in Freeport. And you've worn that jacket with your shoulder holster too much, there's a bit o' bulge at the seam."

Wufei kept his gaze on Duo's back and resisted the temptation to glance down at himself and check. Damn, who was the investigator here?

"S'okay," Duo tossed over his shoulder, "Heero leaves his Freeport clothes here when he's done with a mission."

"Heero's clothes?" Wufei hadn't been sure what to expect once Duo had agreed; since he'd been given the mission he'd been busy reading up on Carver, remembering the little he knew about Freeport and thinking up various threats to get Duo to take him there. He'd not thought much beyond that, he'd just assumed they'd be off the minute Duo had agreed to be his Freeport stoolie. Getting dressed in his best friend's clothes in some strange woman's house had not been part of his mission planning.

"Yeah, Heero's not fond of them, inasmuch as that guy has any preference over anything. He wears them in Freeport out of necessity and leaves 'em here, ready for the next mission." Duo opened a door that led to a sparsely furnished guest bedroom. The air smelled stale. Dead flies decorated the windowsill and scrap yard grime slowly climbed the glass panes on the outside. "You two are 'bout the same build, they should fit you."

"I'm wider in the shoulders than Yuy, and narrower in the waist," Wufei objected without thinking.

Duo had thrown open a closet to the slight smell of mothballs. He'd stuck his head in, but withdrew it to look at Wufei quizzically. "You know this for a fact?"

"We're partners on most of our missions, we frequently get our jackets mixed up."

"That explains the shoulders but I'm dying to hear how you know about the waist," Duo leered. He was sorting through hangers, but his eyes were on Wufei.

Wufei unclenched his teeth enough to say, "We got our sports bags mixed up once. At the gym." He was being baited.

"Huh-huh. Okay, Mr-not-so-wide-in-the-waist, try these on for size."

Wufei looked at the garments tossed carelessly on the bed. "I've got similar clothes in my bag."

"You have a pair of leather pants? I wouldn't have thought you the type. At all. Unless these are threads you keep in a suitcase in a closet with 'undercover' taped to the handle."

Which hit pretty close to the mark, but Wufei wasn't going to give him the pleasure of admitting it. "I'll get my own clothes out and-"

"Allow me." Duo pounced onto his duffel and dumped it on the bed.

"Maxwell-" But the zip had already flown open, and Wufei had promised Trowa he'd try to cooperate.

"Let me see." Duo's quick fingers rifled through the clothes. Strangely enough he was peering at labels and hems as well as the clothes themselves. "T-shirts...bought by the dozen at the same shop Heero gets his, you guys are so predictable. These are okay, they're cheap and they're everywhere, even in Freeport."

Wufei looked up from the pile of his t-shirts dumped on the thin bedcover. Heero's last mission on Freeport had been ten months ago, he was surprised Duo remembered his t-shirt brand.

"Jeans, though, no. Not practical or warm enough, nobody wears 'em on Freeport."

Warm enough?

"Same for the leathers. Nice pair by the way. But you've not worn them enough, and it shows. They're also more expensive than your cover story explains, and you'd freeze your tail off. Oh, and this definitely stays here." The last was said as Duo reached into the bag and pulled out Wufei's spare Browning.

"Can't you smuggle it in past the blockade?" Wufei queried, voice heavy with irony.

"The blockade ain't the problem, and no, you don't bring guns into Freeport." Duo put the Browning on the bedside table and started packing the rejected clothes back in Wufei's bag. "Did you happen to bring a sword?"

Wufei had his mouth open to challenge Duo's assertion that a clever smuggler such as Maxwell couldn't get a small Browning past customs. It stayed open for a bit. "...A sword?"

"Yeah. You had one during the war, didja keep it?"

Of course he'd kept it. And what's more he took it with him wherever he went to train his forms in his spare time. At least that's what he told people it was for, and the three friends who knew about its sentimental value just nodded and said 'sure'.

"I left it at the shuttleport, in their business safe. It's valuable, to me at least. I don't want it stolen. Why-"

"I give it the same odds of getting stolen at the shuttleport as it does in Freeport; this is L2 after all. No matter, here." Duo reached into the cupboard and pulled out a short sword in a plain black scabbard. He tossed it at Wufei who caught it and unsheathed it with a practiced movement.

"Wakizashi," he said, tilting the blade to the grey light from the grimy window. "Heero's?"

"Kinda. I got it for him, but he leaves it here with the rest of his Freeport stuff. You can use that. At least you know how to use a blade, that's a plus."

"You mean... " The full import of the conversation was dawning on Wufei. "You mean I might actually have to use a sword on Freeport?"

"Yup. Well, no, hopefully not, but if we get into a fight-"

"People fight with swords?!"

Duo looked at him steadily, eyes searching. "Wufei...just how much do you know about Freeport?"

Wufei let his wrist go soft, feeling the sword's balance. "Not much," he admitted shortly. "I was only handed this mission yesterday. I didn't have much time to prepare for it. I heard of the weapons ban the blockade imposes, of course. It was there even during the Alliance. I assumed people violated it all the time, though." Smugglers such as Duo, for example. "But I should hope, if you are going to have me fight with a sword, that the opposition will not be armed with a gun?"

"Nope, no guns."

"If that's the case..." Wufei lifted the sword's tip, then flipped the cutting edge to one side in a quick, deadly swipe. "If that's the case, we'll take a detour by the shuttleport's offices to get my sword before we leave. This one is not all that good." He´d just take his sword everywhere with him and not lose sight of it for a minute.

"Well sor-reee it's not up to your standards, Chang. It was the best I could find. Heero never complained."

"That's because Heero doesn't cut with a sword, he bludgeons," Wufei sniffed. "Even his foil technique relies mainly on his unnatural speed and strength. If you gave Heero a crowbar, he'd manage just as well."

Duo's eyebrows twitched up as he smiled archly. "Huh. You ever wonder what Heero says about you?"

"I know what he says about me, he says it to my face and I return the favor."

"You two share such a beautiful friendship." But the irony sounded put on, as if Duo was perfectly aware of the real depths of the two Preventers' comradeship when all but two of their co-workers thought Wufei and Heero got along about as well as fire and ice. Wufei sheathed the sword and looked at Duo obliquely while the latter fished a few more things from the cupboard. Just what had Heero told Maxwell? How close were these two?

Wufei put the sword in a corner, imagining Heero's hands on the hilt. He and Heero had a lot of unspoken rules to their friendship, one of which was they didn't meddle in each other's relationships. So Wufei wasn't sure how close Heero and Duo were. One of the best Preventers in the force paired with a conman and a smuggler? You could make several cheap and cheesy movies out of that one. It seemed farfetched to say the least, but Wufei couldn't help but wonder if that wasn't the reason Heero had agreed to dive time and again back into Freeport, or take Duo with him as an 'advisor' when cornering some gun runners in the Inner Satellites. There had always appeared to be some connection between the two during the war, the kind that could have grown into more, assuming Duo swung that way...well, none of Wufei's business.

"If you'd rather use your own slicer, we can pick it up before we head to Freeport. Though you won't have to fight," Duo added, seeming very sure of that fact. Wufei just nodded tightly and said nothing as he watched the smuggler add a pair of utilitarian grey boxers to the clothes he'd selected. Wonderful. He wasn't sure how close Yuy and Maxwell were, but having Duo choose his underwear was already more intimate than Wufei wanted to get.

Duo gave him and then the clothes a pointed look. Wufei looked back, waiting. Duo turned slowly, but it was only to move as far as the cupboard and lean against it, arms crossed over his chest and a smirk hanging around the corner of his mouth like a thrown gauntlet. Great, looked like Maxwell hadn't grown up one bit. Very well. If Duo wanted to look, then let him get an eyeful.

No hiss or exclamation when Wufei stripped off his shirt, but as he pulled his head free of the cloth he saw Duo's gaze had fixed itself on the scars. The smirk had disappeared. Wufei was unbuckling his pants before Duo spoke.

"Do I even want to see the other guy?"

"The other guy is dead." He did not need to ask what Duo was referring to.

"Of course. What did he use, a flame-thrower?"

"Yes, as a matter of fact. Napalm."

Wufei stopped stripping to run an impartial hand down the planes of his chest. To all appearances, a careless God had flayed off long stretches of skin from Wufei's left side and upper arm, replacing it with a smooth, hairless simulacrum; whorls and dips like divine fingerprints were visible at the edges where He'd tamped it down onto Wufei's body. Scarred remains of a nipple drew a faint brown line against the paler skin.

"Napalm." Duo's gaze was clinical as it went over the burns with the eyes of a soldier. "Then you were bloody lucky, Chang."

"No, I was careless. I didn't dive away fast enough and got splashed. Fortunately for me, Heero was present."

"Heero- ah, right, so that's where he got those burns on his palms and forearms."

"He didn't tell you?" Wufei tried to fit that piece of information into his Yuy-Maxwell theory, ignoring by force of habit the prickle of deadened nerves his hand brushed as he slid down his pants. The damage dribbled down his left hip in the savage pink keloid scarring of a second-degree burn; not as bad as the left side of his chest where the epidermis had been completely scorched away in places. The lighter burns on his side and arm had hurt, agony like a blunt saw taking him apart where the nerves had been attacked; he'd barely felt a thing where they'd been killed outright by the handful of chemical on his chest, spread across the skin as he desperately rolled to put out the fire. The smell...it still gave him nightmares, the smell of his own flesh cooking.

Heero had tried to help. Wufei remembered cursing him like a madman. It'd felt like his friend was ripping Wufei's skin off with his fingernails. Heero´s matching second degree burns on hands and arms were a silent reproof of Wufei´s carelessness; Yuy had risked his limbs to wipe the sticky, burning jelly off of his partner´s body before smothering him in a fire blanket. It had taken some time to come to terms with that debt. A few months, until it was his turn to save Heero's life again. Trowa made a point of keeping a running score in the wry hope they'd eventually remember he couldn't afford to lose either of them.

"No, Heero never did tell me where he got those scars. Just showed up with them on one of our undercover gigs, few years ago. I bugged him, of course, so he said he'd been in an accident, but he never gave me any details." Duo shrugged. The movement shoved him away from the dresser. He walked slowly towards Wufei, examining the burns with nothing more apparent than slight curiosity. "Nice grafts. Very nice."

Wufei glanced down. He'd not thought of them as being nice or otherwise. He'd refused the cosmetic surgery that would have reduced the appearance of scarring. None of the damage impaired his movements - he'd been lucky with that, too - and he'd already wasted two months of his time in and out of hospital, he wasn't going to waste more over something as trivial as appearances.

He slipped down his briefs, tossed them into his pile of clothes and went to pick up the boxers Duo had laid out.

"Must have hurt like a bitch." The casual sympathy changed to a leer when Duo added, "But I see the Chang family jewels didn't come to any harm."

Wufei gave him the look he normally reserved for rats, bureaucrats and other vermin, but he didn't hurry his movements to draw on the boxers. This whole thing, watching him undress, the jab...Duo was trying to fluster him, press him, gain some sort of advantage over him. Wufei didn't know why, or if there was even a reason, but he was damned if he was going to let it happen.

"When did this go down?" Duo asked, settling back against the dresser. His eyes were going over the rest of Wufei's body, maybe checking for other injuries he'd not heard about. He must have noticed the stitches on Wufei's back, the bruises, the obvious impact of a bullet against a flak jacket on his belly, all recent; he made no comment.

"Three years ago. Nearly two years after the Last War."

"Note the irony. Are there a lotta lunatics totting napalm around out there?"

"Less," was all Wufei said. Duo's status was that of an informant, and strictly no security level as far as Wufei was concerned. He slipped on the pants. The leather was coarser than his own, tougher and quilted inside; very warm and quite comfortable, though predictably enough a bit too large at the waist. He cinched in the belt, and judged them acceptable. The leather didn't creak as he moved. They were well-worn.

The long-sleeved t-shirt was also warm, though the cloth was rough and cheap, a rasp against his skin and a distant prickle against the scarring. Wufei moved his arms and shoulders around, trying to tame the feeling and get the fibres settled down against his skin. He looked up to find the jacket held out to him. Duo's pinkies were standing straight out, the parody of a refined gesture a contrast to the bulky jacket that looked like something a less reputable biker would wear. Wufei slipped his arms through the sleeves without bothering to comment. Duo settled it over his shoulders with a couple of pats. It was surprisingly heavy but also well worn, some kind of tough polyester ribbed with rubber edges at shoulders and elbows. Wufei relaxed his arms and then his fist shot out, giving the air a couple of punches. It wasn't too tight over the shoulders, not enough to hamper his movements anyway.

"Not too bad," he grumbled.

"Hmmm." Duo was back at the bed, stuffing Wufei's t-shirts and other articles of clothing from the cupboard into a stained and beaten knapsack. Wufei caught a swift glance from beneath the thick bangs. The gaze was gauging. It occured to Wufei that Duo's baiting might have been to goad him into a reaction that would prove he couldn't shut up and take a small piece of humiliation. The Preventer felt a flash of annoyance, but he kept it from showing. The last time he saw you, you were a child, he reminded himself; a fifteen-year-old warrior with too much pride and arrogance.

Wufei had kept the pride and the arrogance, but now they were founded on his true self; they came from knowing he was doing something essential, that he was protecting what he'd killed for in the past. He did what had to be done, said what had to be said, however much that inconvenienced some people, or himself for that matter. If Duo didn't realize that, then that space-jockey didn't remember Wufei all that well either.


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Part 2

I should be posting the chapters at a rate of one per week. Comments and typo checks much appreciated ^_^




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[info]ratherbe4gotten
2008-07-19 02:02 pm UTC (link)
Freeport is still the best story I've ever read, in any fandom. The ideas behind it have stuck with me for years! I still rec it to anyone I find who wanders into the GW fandom (or anyone else who will listen xD ) even after all this time.

I'm really excited to see you posting the rewrite here, not that I need much of an excuse to read it again.

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[info]maldoror_gw
2008-07-21 01:47 am UTC (link)
Yeah, I was hoping it'd be a good reason for some of the one-time readers to reread it ^_^ As for the ideas sticking with you, what can I say; Anarchy Lives! (In our imaginations. That's safer)

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[info]gameazel
2008-07-19 02:55 pm UTC (link)
OMG! I was so excited to just see a mention of your GW stuff - not that GW's one of my fandoms; I'm just into your epics.

New reread, totally!

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[info]maldoror_gw
2008-07-21 01:48 am UTC (link)
And epic this certainly is ^^; It's not the length of The Arrangement, but near enough, and probably more of a continuous novel-like story.

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[info]askerian
2008-07-19 03:45 pm UTC (link)
... Damn it, I'm not supposed to like Heero-less fics. *sulks at you*

Oh well. XD

The beginning was especially well-written, compact and informative without being too dry. I don't know, I liked the flow. Kinda snappish in a way, that fit well with Wufei's mood. :3

(hahaha the comments on Relena. *purrs* I love this mix of "grumblegrumble. silly woman/ pacifism, HAH. More like politician pacifism. huffmuttersulk" and "okay I kind of think she has admirable sides too -- but um the important thing is the people who are using/targeting her/not seeing her true self like blind sheep! Cows. Things. >:O")

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[info]maldoror_gw
2008-07-21 01:50 am UTC (link)
There's a lot of G-boy missing in here; Heero is at least mentioned a lot, but Quatre in particular hardly has a showing ;_; But that was fun too, concentrating on these two guys to the max. Glad to hear it flows, and I think that's in part due to the rewrite. It's amazing how many adverbs and little useless 'gimmick' sentences I pruned out and you hardly notice, except when you reach the end and it felt...lighter.

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[info]the_inkslinger
2008-07-19 04:29 pm UTC (link)
Oh my god, Freeport has been my favourite of yours-- and also, come to think of it, I can't think of any fanfic I have ever read that I like better. I have read it and reread it and reread it again so many times... oh, I just love it. The way you've characterized Wufei and Duo kicks ass, and the world--Freeport-- is so in-depth and gritty. *loves*

ANYWAY the point was, I am very much looking forward to an even better version. And also, thank you thank you for writing Freeport. It makes me soo happy. <3

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[info]maldoror_gw
2008-07-21 01:52 am UTC (link)
The New Freeport! Now with 60% less exclamation points! Order yours today!

I've often gone over some scenes in my old fics and fixed a typo that jumped out at me, but Freeport deserved a more comprehensive facelift. I hope it reads even better now!

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[info]swordage
2008-07-19 04:47 pm UTC (link)
Huh. I will admit, I clicked on the link for the sole reason that I was bored and had nothing better to do, and then I got sucked in and now I really want to read more. I think I will wait for the rewrite, though. I know how old stories can be. XD

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[info]maldoror_gw
2008-07-21 02:03 am UTC (link)
I advise you to wait for the rewrite too ^^; Not that I changed much in the story per se, but it should flow much more smoothly this time around. I'm pretty sure I can spin out one chapter a week, maybe even two if I have the time, so it shouldn't be too long a wait ^_^

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[info]civilized_era
2008-07-19 04:53 pm UTC (link)
NO WAAAY!! ♥

Freeport, the first time I read it, was outright stunning, and I have this annual tradition where I get really nostalgic for the GW universe and particularly this fic so I go back to reread --Freeport is this fic where you can read while curled up with a mug of something sweet and hot or a bag of popcorn, it's so enjoyable and interesting and complete; looking forward to the rewrites, thanks for writing in the first place! :D

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[info]maldoror_gw
2008-07-21 02:04 am UTC (link)
You're welcome ^_^ The rewrite should be mainly aesthetic, the essential 'mug of chocolate and popcorn' feel should remain intact!

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[info]sesshiyuki
2008-07-19 05:20 pm UTC (link)
I cannot but be thrilled there will be more Freeport. :3 And seeing as how everything you've written in the past few years is amazing, I'm betting this rewrite of Freeport will be, too. Plus, yay, more Wufei! (Is it weird that my mind can draw parallels between Lee and Wufei? Though their attitudes are different as night and day)

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[info]maldoror_gw
2008-07-21 02:06 am UTC (link)
Lol, that's not a parallel I'd thought of!

I think my writing has improved a lot in the technical sense (punctuation, phrase construction etc) so I'm hoping the rewrite will do the story justice!

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[info]jame_alec
2008-07-19 07:54 pm UTC (link)
lkasjdflkasjdflkajsdgasdgsd omg.

I have read Freeport probably a dozen times, and now I have to go read it again, damn you. XD

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[info]maldoror_gw
2008-07-26 05:11 am UTC (link)
Oooh, lucky number 13 ^__^ Well hopefully the facelift I gave it will make it still interesting to reread.

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[info]anti_paragon
2008-07-19 08:59 pm UTC (link)
Oh my god. *is sucked in once again*

You really do spoil us, you know. I hope you never stop. :3 I'm looking forward for rereading this story with a rewrite!

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[info]maldoror_gw
2008-07-26 05:12 am UTC (link)
What with my schedule, I've had few enough occasions these days to spoil my readers, alas. Hopefully this will do in teh meantime, even if it's a rewrite ^_^

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[info]dubious_volute
2008-07-19 10:06 pm UTC (link)
OMG, it's Freeport! Definitely one of my favourite fanfics ever...you built a fascinating, gritty, memorable world from the ground up, and aged the characters so believably. Am really looking forward to this rewrite.

You were the one who finally got me round to liking Wufei. ^^ That was a major achievement.

The only thing that's sticking out to me here is the double reference to cows within the first few paragraphs. Not that I don't love cows. But would Wufei have had enough contact with cows, given his background, that he should think of them twice, so easily? Also, is "kiroid" an alternative spelling of "keloid?"

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[info]maldoror_gw
2008-07-26 05:21 am UTC (link)
Now that's odd, I know I looked up the right spelling of that type of scar tissue. I must have made a typo or transcription mistake. But it's definitely Keloid, not Keroid. *fixes* Thanks! As for the cows, that's pretty much into our collective consciousness I imagine, even for colony-born people. (Now I'm wondering how many twenty-year-olds today have actually seen a real live cow...) However, two reps of cows is a bit too much, overuse of a simile *fixes*

I hope you enjoy the rewrite ^__^ Please flag anything else you see!

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[info]jena13
2008-07-20 12:03 am UTC (link)
Whoohoo! I just re-read this a few weeks ago, actually. And it still kept me up far later than it should have, as I would try to finish "just one more chapter" before bed. The culture you came up with for Freeport is so awesome, I can't get enough of it. In fact, it inspired some of the setting for a roleplay scenario that my husband and I run. He's not into GW slash, but even he thought the idea of Freeport was neat. Glad to see you revisit this one, as it's definitely in my all-time top five favorite fanfictions (or any fiction, honestly). I especially love Babka (poor, misguided Wufei~). <3

I know it'll likely never happen, but a sequel to this would probably have me going "Squee!" for a month. ;)

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[info]maldoror_gw
2008-07-26 05:33 am UTC (link)
Yeah, not likely to happen, I'm afraid! But Freeport lives on in all sorts of forms it seems ^__^

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[info]demon_stryker
2008-07-20 04:41 am UTC (link)
I LOVE this story. I have the whole thing saved on my laptop, so I can read it anytime without internet connection and revel in the awesomeness that is 'Freeport'. The first story I read was 'The Arrangement' and then I found 'Freeport'- which I enjoyed slightly more because Duo was in it... It's great to see it again and that there are others who agree with me that it's one of the best pieces of fanfiction out there.

The whole atmosphere and culture of 'Freeport' was just amazing and astounding, the web of ideals like anarchy, communism, capitalism, etc that intertwined and made Freeport work as a community. Just the thought that you put into this story left me inspired and seeing now that it's going through a rewrite just makes me completely happy and leaves me melted in fangirl happiness- especially the DuoxWufei bits... ^.^

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[info]maldoror_gw
2008-07-28 02:22 am UTC (link)
*sponges up fangirly happiness puddle* Thanks for the encouragements! Sometimes I think I should get The Arrangement the same treatment...but I'd either be leaving in parts I would not write the same way now, or I'd be changing it A LOT and that feels like potentially damaging it. I guess it's best left as it is, warts and all!

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[info]the_dragongirl
2008-07-20 05:52 am UTC (link)
A few months ago, I was bored and finding nothing new of interest in any of the fandoms I read, so I decided to go back and see what you had written before you started writing in Naruto. I found The Arrangement, and became hooked on Gundam. Freeport was, indeed, one of the best fics ever written in the fandom, as far as I have found. It is such a pleasure to see you going back and improving. It's hard being such a late-comer to the fandom, because I've already missed the golden age. Reworkings like this give me comfort that, although Gundam is old, it isn't dead.

Thank you so much.

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[info]maldoror_gw
2008-07-28 02:24 am UTC (link)
GW is definitely an aging fandom; it was almost past its golden age when I got hooked five years ago. But the fics written in it stay on as testimony to one kickass, oddly thought-provoking anime with big badass robots!

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[info]cathedral_junki
2008-07-20 06:40 am UTC (link)
*laughs* I agree with all of the comments here. This fic taught me to love Wufei. It is one of the best fics in the fandom and one of my personal all time favorites of any fandom. I have it saved on my computer in case cyber space decides to eat all of the copies out there and i'm thrill that you're going back to work on it. Maybe we'll get a sequal out of you. ^_~ the id and i are happy to have you back on our side of town, if only for the moment.

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[info]maldoror_gw
2008-07-30 04:47 am UTC (link)
Cyberspace would have to be very hungry to eat all the copies; there's a lot of archives, and I'm gonna have to track them down once the corrections are done ^^; I doubt my inspiration will fly as far as a sequel, alas, but I'm hoping this will hone my appetite for original fiction.

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[info]hbunny8188
2008-07-20 06:42 am UTC (link)
When I first got into GW about two years ago, every single rec site I visited mentioned "The Arrangement", which I finally read on Dacia's site. Oh my god, that was seriously the hottest 1x5x1 I had ever read. I loved how true to the solider spirit Heero and Wufei were, it was so raw and powerful and yummy. Then I decided to read "Freeport" and it was awesome. I love how creative the story line, characters and culture were, and you're so attentive to detail that I had no doubt that Freeport existed. I can't wait to read your re-write, and then I'm going to re-read "The Arrangement". I'm so excited that you're revisiting GW, and wish you the best of luck!

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[info]maldoror_gw
2008-07-30 04:50 am UTC (link)
Thanks ^__^ I was tempted to give The Arrangement the same facelift, but I think that might spoil something integral to it; the raw energy that comes when one doesn't know one's boundaries yet.

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[info]alicebs
2008-07-20 10:06 am UTC (link)
Wonderful! Freeport is also one of my favourite Gundam Wing stories. I have compiled all the chapters long ago into a Word document, from Dacia's archive "A little piece of Gundam Wing", and printed it out for my leisurely enjoyment. I must have re-read it a dozen times since.

I am looking forward to the improved version. It is amazing the number of typos that become visible when you read something on paper instead of onscreen. My copy of Freeport is annotated, so I could help, perhaps, catching anything that you might have missed. I will read carefully the re-written version, and if there is anything in it that you have not seen, I will be glad to point it out.

Besides typos, the two substantial errors I saw were, first, the name of the custom's officer that checks Duo and Wufei upon their arrival in Freeport changes in one of the chapters, and the second is the storyline. I could really not bring Wufei's stay in Freeport to three months, at most to 2 months and 3 weeks.

Looking forward to reading Freeport again!

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[info]maldoror_gw
2008-07-30 04:54 am UTC (link)
Yeah, it would help if I printed this out for typos...but I'll count on the dozens of eyes of my readers and spare some trees ^__^ If there's anything from your annotated copy that jumps out in this new edition, please do tell! I did a pretty thorough job, but there could still be some clunkers left over. I'll check the custom officer's name, for one...As for Wufei's stay, I did have a timeline written out in my notes, but I think there are some chapters where I merely suggest how much time has gone by, rather than laying out the old 'and this many weeks/months later'. If in these revisions the time gone by still feels fuzzy, flag it to me and I'll see if I can clarify it. Thanks ^__^

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Annotated version - [info]alicebs, 2008-07-30 07:06 pm UTC
Re: Annotated version - [info]maldoror_gw, 2008-07-31 12:52 am UTC

[info]alita_b_angel
2008-07-20 10:42 am UTC (link)
DAMN YOUR CUNNING PLAN.

I was thinking about my annual Mal fic reread (you've seriously become a tradition in my life) and Freeport was scheduled for next month, but now I get an update as well.

Freeport is special to me since it is the one and only fic where anarachy as a system actually works in a credible system. To the point when me and my friends were watching V for Vendetta, all of us came out of the cinema going, "Anarachy doesn't work." Long pause. And somehow, simulataneously, all of us said, "EXCEPT IN FREEPORT!." And spent the next few minutes yelling FREEPORRRTTTT at each other like insane maniacs.

*rubs hands*

A rewrite seems exciting!

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[info]maldoror_gw
2008-07-30 05:04 am UTC (link)
Lol, immortality is mine ^__^ I don't know how workable that would be in real life, but I'm glad it sounds good on e-paper!

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[info]wolfco_tr
2008-07-20 03:47 pm UTC (link)
This is about the most pleasant surprise I've had in forever. Freeport showcases such a fully functioning environment that when I first read it, I thought that Freeport is the what true socialism would evolve into. Even though it is pure fiction, it really made me think. Of course, the bonus DuoxWufei factor just makes it soo much more fun. I will be reading your rewrite faithfully.

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Typo?
[info]alicebs
2008-07-20 05:39 pm UTC (link)
It stayed open for bit. "...A sword?"

Should that not be: It stayed open for a bit. "...A sword?"

Could not see any other typos. Missed some little touches, like "Wufei glanced down (in surprise)."

Edited at 2008-07-20 05:40 pm UTC

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[info]maldoror_gw
2008-07-21 01:44 am UTC (link)
A yes thanks, the 'open for (a) bit' is a typo. *fixes* Good, one less typo :) I don't want to correct punctuation and readability on one hand, and spawn tons of typos on the other.

Not sure where the 'glanced down in surprise' is supposed to be, though. Which sentence?

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Re: Typo? - [info]alicebs, 2008-07-21 05:26 am UTC
Re: Typo? - [info]maldoror_gw, 2008-07-22 03:10 am UTC

[info]karorumetallium
2008-07-21 06:44 pm UTC (link)
KJSDHKJASDHKJASDHKAJDHKJHJKADHKSJAHDJA

Dunno if it's your best (that's for you to decide) but it's DEFINITELY MY FAVORITE ONE. THE BEST I'VE READ IN ANY FANDOM, AND I'M SERIOUS. I LOVE IT.

I didn't think you could rewrite it and make it better (it was like, perfect to my eyes XD) but... well, here I am.

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[info]feste3
2008-07-21 08:21 pm UTC (link)
OMG! Pardon my fangirling. I usually lurk but I have always LOVED Freeport as it was the second story of yours I ever read (after The Arrangement) and it just solidified for me what a fantastic writer you are. I am soooooooo excited to get to read the newly cleaned up version ;) Cheers!

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[info]brown_bess
2008-07-22 05:44 am UTC (link)
Oh happy day! Freeport is still my all-time favorite GW. *goes off to read*

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[info]aisushi
2008-07-24 12:47 pm UTC (link)
Nyuu~ I only read Freeport in its entirety once -- and only once. Because you know what? I knew it was going to suck me in. Like that time you were writing Lee/Gaara, and I just couldn't read any other Gaara for the longest time because your Gaara has become one with the canon in my head.

Same with Freeport. It became the standard for what I want out of 2x5, and out of a lot of fanficcy things. And it's going to happen again. Argh, woman, don't stop getting better! XD

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[info]macey_muse
2008-07-25 12:38 pm UTC (link)
Yay, Freeport!

I reread Arrangement again just a couple of weeks back, it's probably time I looked at Freeport (for, what, the fifth? sixth time? XD)

(yaaaaay)

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[info]discord2chaos
2008-07-26 04:47 am UTC (link)
I have read everything you have written, except for your One Piece fics, and love each and every one, and I have to wonder if this means you are returning to the GW, or at least continuing your foray into the Naruto fandoms. Everyone misses your GW fics and I would love to see a continuation of The Source of All Things. Whatever you choose to do know that everything you write is pure gold.
Oh, by the by, I don't know if you have heard of it but if you haven't you should check out the Death Note anime my friends and I think it would be right up your ally.

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