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Naruto Fic: Break In The Routine (Kakashi/Gai) - Link to all chapters
Yet another effort to tidy up my memories/fics. Sorry to spam people's friends lists, I'll try not to do these more than once a day, but I'd like to get my LJ into some kind of order.

Title: Break in the Routine
Pairing: KakashiGai
Rating: PG15
Status: Complete



Break in the Routine 1/4

Break in the Routine 2/4

Break in the Routine 3/4

Break in the Routine 4/4

Epilogue


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[info]waltzofthemoon
2006-08-26 11:12 pm UTC (link)
Don't feel bad! This is actually much appreciated. The obsessive organizer in me worships you. ^_^

Thanks again!~

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[info]dwessa
2006-08-26 11:54 pm UTC (link)
:D

I completely forgot about this fic...I'm thankful for a chance to read it again. :3 And mind not!-- organization is one of the most wonderful things in the world.

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[info]monkey5s
2006-08-27 12:18 am UTC (link)
Yeah, HEAR HEAR! We are happy to have anything from you, to remind us of earlier works if there is no new plot bunny assault.

And this one is a particular favorite of mine, anyway.

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[info]darksideofstorm
2006-08-27 12:33 am UTC (link)
I now have a tag in my memories simply titled 'maldoror_gw fics'. Thank you for this =)

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[info]maldoror_gw
2006-08-27 12:41 am UTC (link)
Lol, you're welcome ^_^

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(Anonymous)
2006-08-27 03:50 am UTC (link)
you can prevent spamming friendslists by checking the 'backdate' option on the update page (near the select icon bit). that way, your post will appear on your own journal page, but not on your flist page. just thought you might like to know that. ^_^;

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[info]crazyforkakashi
2006-08-27 01:42 am UTC (link)
Pleas organize some more

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[info]wunder
2006-08-27 04:25 am UTC (link)
♥ The inner, very repressed organized person inside my head is rejoicing.

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[info]qem_chibati
2006-08-27 04:27 am UTC (link)
Hee! Well I'd never read this story before, so I'm definetly glad for it.

I really enjoyed this. =D

It was interesting seeing Kakashi's thoughts and the way that he looked out for Gai.

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:)
[info]__tk__
2006-08-27 02:51 pm UTC (link)
:),

This has little to nothing to do with your post, but I was watching Naruto last night (second night of the Gaara/Lee fight) and I can totally see Lee/Neiji involved in this really skewed relationship with Lee always trying to win his approval/love. Then the new "softer" Gaara comes back to town and is not impressed by this state of affairs.

All of Lee's friends don't really approve of the whole Lee/Neiji Relationship of Doom, but they are absolutely certain that anything Lee/Gaara can only lead to dead bodies and broken limbs. And taking that into consideration, they encourage Lee to take some time to himself. Of course, he doesn't and there is drama, and fighting, and Gai/Kakashi parallels, and Neiji realizing what he's lost, and territorial Gaara who doesn't quite understand why he isn't supposed to go to other Hidden Villages and break up people's pseudo happy relationships.

All in all, it was a great daydream and I thought that I would share it.

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Re: :)
[info]maldoror_gw
2006-08-27 03:30 pm UTC (link)
That might be the seedling of a good fic! Though Neji's character would need careful handling, not to make him too much of a stereotypical bastard, more just unable to connect to someone he sees caught up in his fate as a failure. Neji is a really tough character to write IC, once you get away from the Chuunin exam mindframe and try to put him in a relationship. I love the character, but I've never had the guts to write him in a central role ^^;

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Re: :)
[info]__tk__
2006-08-27 09:08 pm UTC (link)
:),

Well, here's to hoping you find the guts to explore his character. You were actually the one to put Lee/Neiji ideas into my head with DR. I was like...yeah, I can see Lee having a crush on Neiji when they were younger.

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[info]devenyvajel
2008-07-17 10:45 am UTC (link)
After owning neji, naruto can back up lee and together they can pwn sasuke. Rubbereruben AM Not in this fight:p Pff, I'm sick and tired of all the genius sissies.

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Don't feel sorry!
[info]radical_archer
2006-08-27 06:05 pm UTC (link)
I loved this on aff.net, but if you're reposting all your work to your LJ, I for one am not going to complain at all!

And when I said I loved this fic, I meant it! The characterizations are spot-on, and the way you go into how Kakashi thinks is perfection. I'm sure I gave you a review of this fic when aff.net actually worked, but I'm kinda on way too much Cherry Coke right now, and I'm babbling.

WEEEE! ^_~

Anyway, just keep posting, and all your fans will keep commenting. ^_^

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[info]hercat
2006-08-27 09:29 pm UTC (link)
Wow, it's great to see this reposted, I had a lot of fun reading it again. You have such a great turn of phrase, I always enjoy reading your work.

Thanks for replying to my email, you've prompted the nitpicker in me to go through this story again.

Break in the routine
part 1

t was their opinion that if that was the worse character defect Anko had picked up from her
t was their opinion that if that was the worst character defect Anko had picked up from her


Part 2
Shizune with a bunch of misfile reports.
Shizune with a bunch of misfiled reports.

That was unexpected. Thought it shouldn't have been. G
That was unexpected. Though it shouldn't have been. G

Part 3
He could faster than most.
He could move faster than most.


A finger force his painful, blistered lips open and roughly cleared the gunk
A finger forced his painful, blistered lips open and roughly cleared the gunk



. Do you job, young kunoichi! Our fighting forces rely on you!"
. Do your job, young kunoichi! Our fighting forces rely on you!"

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[info]maldoror_gw
2006-08-28 12:59 am UTC (link)
Yikes! Thanks! *runs off to fix*

I actually remember spotting one of those - the misfile one, I think - and thinking I had to come back to get it, but forgot :P And man, I'm gonna get the definitions of worse/worst tattooed across my knuckles. Well, I would, except that sounds painful...

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[info]hercat
2006-08-28 02:40 pm UTC (link)
No problemo, I'm actually doing the same for DR and kindred, but it's taking longer 'cause I keep getting distracted by the pretty words...

Do you have an email I can send the file to? Or I can just post it as a comment again.

hercat@hotmail.com

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[info]maldoror_gw
2006-08-28 11:48 pm UTC (link)
They'll both need it :P I brushed up DR myself a little while ago, because there were a few awkward moments in the text, but I bet I missed some spelling clunkers ^^; I was mainly on the lookout for rogue exclamation marks, ellipses and paragraph breaks, as well as bad sentence structure...Send any spelling errors you find to jenn_ange@yahoo.ca, and I'll fix them asap ^_^ Thanks!

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[info]night_shifts
2006-08-27 10:01 pm UTC (link)
Cool, much appreciated. This was one of my all time fav fic's. Probably because:

1. It's Gai x Kakashi,
2. It's brilliantly written,
3. It's Gai x Kakashi,
4. I've not read anyone's work who captures the characters personalities so well. (Gai is bloody hard to peg down)
5. It's Gai x Kakashi
6. Kakashi's concern for Gai and it's consequences was too cool for words. XD
7. It's Gai x Kakashi
8. Gai's attitude, and the tiny glimpse' you gave us of the serious man who strives to be the best, and is embarrassed by his poor first time/performance...yet doesn't see anything embarrassing about challenging Kakashi in that area was very amusing.
9. It's Gai x Kakashi
10. Everyone else’s reactions to the news that Gai and Kakashi are a couple. Brilliant!
10a. It's Gai x Kakashi

^___^

Just wondered. I know your on a much deserved break ^_^, but I really love this pairing (my love for your Lee/Gaara fic's goes without saying) and 'Descent' was a pleasure to read...repeatedly and very often. Would you consider writing more on this pairing, or any follow-on's from 'Descent' and/or 'A Break in the Routine'?

Jen

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[info]maldoror_gw
2006-08-28 12:57 am UTC (link)
Now, this might be a long shot, but something tells me you like GaiKakashi fics.

I'd like to write this pairing again; it's one that makes a lot of sense, and the characters are interesting (but man, they're both hard to write). We'll see what my inspiration serves me up next!

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[info]night_shifts
2006-08-28 07:18 pm UTC (link)
^^ Love Gai/Kak.

Yeah, they're real hard to pin down, but you manage it perfectly. Glad they're not off your raidar, I'm happy. Thanks again!

Jen

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[info]mist_stalker
2006-08-28 02:27 pm UTC (link)
spam away dear, I love reading and rereading your fics. And who knows, maybe one will come up that I haven't read yet.

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[info]permetaform
2006-08-31 07:43 am UTC (link)

I'm not sure I ever commented on this series so I'm gonna do it now and just...this is one of the few fics I pull out every so often to read again. This is fucking RARE. I don't know what is it that makes me come back to it, probably the mix of humor and anguish that you do so well that pulls me back to your other fics. but just...awesome awesome work. Thank you. =)

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[info]bandit_wraith
2006-09-01 08:00 pm UTC (link)
XD it's okay, it reminded me to re-read it again. -heart-

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[info]aquitaineq
2006-09-05 03:40 am UTC (link)
I just wanted to say how much I love your work! I've read a bunch of them, and I just wanted to say that I really hope you write a sequel to "Something in the Water" It can be hard to tell if someone has or not, I read a bunch of your stories on the Hidden Village Naruto fanfic archive. Haven't read them all yet, I'm trying to save some for later hehe.

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Gundam Wing fanart
[info]sqkiwibird
2006-09-10 06:35 am UTC (link)
Hi. *wave*

I know you've more or less left the Gundam Wing fandom already, but my sisters and I were late to join the fandom and only recently found your fics, which are awesome by the way. Anyway, my sister Robin drew me some Freeport fanart for my birthday, and, since Freeport is your fic, I was wondering whether you'd like a copy of the fanart. :) Let me know.

-Kiwi Bird

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Re: Gundam Wing fanart
[info]maldoror_gw
2006-09-10 05:39 pm UTC (link)
Oooh, link me please ^_^ Or it might be easier to mail a copy to jenn_ange@yahoo.ca. I'm curious to see it!

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[info]shayheyred
2006-09-10 04:16 pm UTC (link)
I'm delighted to say I've just friended you -- I was shown the link to Hunter's Moon, and that pretty much sealed the deal. And now back to your regularly scheduled comments...

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[info]maldoror_gw
2006-09-10 05:38 pm UTC (link)
Lol, welcome aboard ^_^

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[info]fanes
2007-04-02 08:05 am UTC (link)
hey! I stumbled across this story while looking for "Diplomatic Relations"[and I'm still looking out for it...]

but this one just caught my attention. gai and kakashi that's really some pairing! and your writing style is awesome!!

thanks for sharing!!

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[info]maldoror_gw
2007-04-02 12:12 pm UTC (link)
Thanks ^_^ Yeah, Gai/Kakashi is both fairly conceivable within canon...and also totally crack ^^;

DR should be in my memories as well, with a link to all chapters.

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